Women Rights

Women Rights

Monday, February 29, 2016


Women’s Rights pertains many qualities against women to be divergent from men. Apart of an ideology that focuses on women being treated as equal to men is discrimination. It is important to be aware that women rights is be to identified as equivalent.  Discrimination and violence is a part of women rights and their fight. In the article “Discrimination: Inequality against women,” speaks the different responsibilities a woman is categorize in the position of discrimination and violence against women.  “Discrimination: Inequality against women” is a powerful article that the author Ms. Kanchan Saxena uses Logos, Pathos, and Ethos very well discussing women and their battle with discrimination and violence. Ms. Kanchan Saxena creates Logos in her article is stating evidence that will support and build her article starting with violence. “Battering is the leading causes of injury to women aged 15 to 44 in the U.S.  Approximately 50% of the homeless women and children in this country are on the streets because of violence in their home.  One fifth to one half of U.S. women were sexually abused as children at least once. Most of them by an older malrelative.  Nearly two third women who receive public assistance “welfare” have been abused by an intimate partner at some time in there” (Kanchan). Violence occur all around the world and in different settings. And to help build her article she acknowledges the a few facts about Violence, that women would go through in the land of the free. In speaking of the land of the free, considering that I am discussing Women Rights. Human Trafficking is a well-known violence that deals with women. And human trafficking happened all around the world which is forced, tricked and controlled under another person authority but against the other person own will. In the form of how the author use the pathos appeal is by reviewing traffickers control. “Making her work to pay back money they say she owes them, threatening to hurt her or her family, threatening to have her deported, taking away her passport, birth certificate, or ID card, preventing her from having contact with friends, family, or the outside world” (Kanchan). The emotional approach was achieved very well because it speaks upon the fear that is place upon a women and the terrible consequences that happens when the person disobey the controller.  The Ethos appeal applies to the article by building around discrimination of women. The Ethos of Ms. Kanchan Saxena can be built a lot stronger, the logos and pathos was very strong.

                In conclusion, Ms. Kanchan Saxena uses logos and pathos impressively good through her article but ethos not as strong. The article does cover violence and discrimination and as well as other qualities of women rights but lacks the credibility. The article shows comparison that is made between men and women, the inferior inequalities against women, and the power of men control. The law will protect everyone in which one stands but be more in the men circle but also hear the women views.
Works Cited

Saxena, Kanchan. "Discrimination: Inequality Against Women." International Journal Of Multidisciplinary Approach & Studies 2.5 (2015): 163-169. Academic Search Premier. Web. 29 Feb. 2016.

Anderson, Maria. “Discrimination Against Women.” Online Video Clip. YouTube. YouTube, 28 Oct. 013. Web. 29 Feb. 2016.
Nova, Terra. "Discrimination." Photograph. Flickr. 14 June 2009. Web. 29 Feb. 2016.
-Shevanha Revels

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed reading your blog post. You included some powerful information. I believe that statistical data helps show the magnitude of the problem. Which you were able to show in a great way. Bringing awareness to the many ways women are being mistreated today, can be a step towards the solution.

    _Cinthia Rios

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